mõnikord lihtsalt ei ole midagi positiivset öelda. valetada ka ju alati ei viitsi.
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Siis tuleb öelda, et suht hästi tehtud, aga kui sa pingutaksid veel, teeksid parema.Kommentaar
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Head riimid B&R!
Proovi veel ja ehk saad veel parema luuletuse tehtud.
Ja kui sa pead seda esitama, siis mõtle, mida õpetaja arvaks? Ta on vb sama kibestunud ja kuri nagu paljud foorumlasedki.Algselt postitanud kasutaja Cule pooltEestis sünnib iga päev üks Ronaldinho,aga treener teeb temast TVMK tasemel mängija
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Fernando Torres
Uskumatu mees
Champions me oleme
Kõik - ütles Queen
Ole-ole, ole-ole
Fernando Torres
Fernando Torres"The great fallacy is that the game is first and last about winning. It’s nothing of the kind. The game is about glory. It’s about doing things in style, with a flourish, about going out and beating the other lot, not waiting for them to die of boredom". - Danny Blanchflower, legendKommentaar
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milline mõistusega inimene mõtleb teha fernando torresest luuletuse? kas sul tõesti ei tulnud ühtegi paremat ideed?forever fooling, free and using, sliding down the slide that breaks a willKommentaar
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See on ebaterve huumor.Kommentaar
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He has the looks of a actor,
in respect to Liverpool's success he will be a deciding factor.
He has inherited the shirt of the past great number nines,
on the best defences in the world he effortlessly dines.
He can score, he can pass,
so far he has proven himself to be full of class.
His effect this season has been profound,
he is surely one of the best players around.
He has speed, he has strength,
with his play he takes away my breath.
As long as Torres is there the future is bright,
and the Premier League title is within sight.The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the inequities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he who, in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of the darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who attempt to poison and destroy My brothers. And you will know I am the Lord when I lay My vengeance upon you.Kommentaar
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Kuulge, B&R-i luuletus on ju väga hea. Ma ütlen noormehele, et kindlasti mine selle luuletusega klassi ette, sest siin olevad vanad peerud on lihtsalt kibestunud. Ma olen kindel, et sa saad hea hinde, sest riimid on sul head ja leidlikud.Kommentaar
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Mulle meeldib kellegi MM-i aegne haiku:
Samson haircut
Couldn't score in house of pain
Torrid Torres
See on ka tore:
If you would be my Torres love
How happy we should be
A shirt of red we'd share my love
Left o'er from Robbie Keane
For I your Dalglish evermore
Speak Shankly's words 'I do'
I'll build a wall of Tommy Smiths'
To guard our love so true.
the woman who hurt him must surely have trouble sleeping
because belle of st mark is a beauty extraordinaireKommentaar
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Torres, Torres, Überalles
Pool on perses, juuksed alles.Kommentaar
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Juuksed ju ka maha aetud.Kommentaar
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